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Feeling depressed, I put on a smile,
As I do my best to choke down the bile.
A blank expression I always wear,
But in fact, true happiness is rare.
'What's wrong, what is it?' they ask.
'Nothing,' I say, composing a mask.
At the end of the day, I lay on my bed,
My heart and mind feeling like lead.
If only they knew,
What I have to go through.
There are others who have it worse than me,
I don't realise it, but compared to others, I'm free.
I wrote this when I was feeling depressed a while ago. There are some references to people I know personally in there, too.
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photofreak385 Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2013

To show how much I appreciate my watchers, I have made a feature dedicaded to them! This beautiful piece of work is a part of it :D

Check it out: fav.me/d6iotbn :D

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IchiRuki-HitsuKarin Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks! I didn't think my stuff would ever go in a feature, but there it is! *happy tears* I like your feature too! 
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photofreak385 Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2013
Everybody deserves to be in a feature or too! Glad you like it so much :aww:
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IchiRuki-HitsuKarin Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Heheh, thanks!:D
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MisakiWantsACookie Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
MY BABY *hugs you and never lets go ever*
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IchiRuki-HitsuKarin Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
BABU :tighthug:
Thanks for the :+fav:
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MisakiWantsACookie Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
<3<3<3
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IchiRuki-HitsuKarin Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
^ 3 ^
:tighthug:
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unusualArtist23 Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Very well written, the language portrays the subject of the poem well.
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IchiRuki-HitsuKarin Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you :)
And thank you for the :+fav:! :tighthug::typerhappy::happybounce::squee:
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